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    Hi guys I been writing a few more lyrics come check them out and let me know what you think if I have improved over the years of what I was writing.

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    watch my time fly high motherfuka's learn not to lie cause they will surely die / keep on fucking with my life you will find n release unleash the beast you will find out my killer kind tonight pop pop bang bang I took nine lives I ma bee sting a motherfuka chop ya dissect don't forget the shit I am all legitimate with my words I spit / I am no fool don't forget the number one rule give me my crown cause the QLD rap king is still around!

    ma inspiration to the the current generation I am so motivated I make pages become so endless you might as well call me continuous /south rockhampton to the highlands motherfuka street gutta counting tha cheddar my dreams is my scene you can't stop so don't defy me I am psychotic Ima mentally crazy/ I am so rich of heart I have my own currancy you will find in me !
    its the k-i-n-g to the motherfukin g-i-e capital P that's me and this my hearty legacy called gangsta POETRY!

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    its the attention of the revolution confronting ready packing ready to start gunning / chopping head's off blast skulls with sawn off's shot gun's leave no mercy for no one / help for a fool we use noisy tools bicken back being bool is the rule / cash money man made rep what you expect you ain't as fresh to get what we get !
    gold chains on the necks silver bracelets on ma wrist
    flash stylish threads countin stacks of ched-darrrrr mother fukaaa!

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    • #3
      damn bruh you killed the rap game that was stupid dope fresh to def

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      • #4
        I don't under what you mean lol sorry

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        • #5
          Damn you WHACK nigga!

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          • #6
            Today 12:26 AM #5
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            Damn you WHACK nigga!



            what he she said

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            • #7
              you guys are funny as fuck haha

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              • #8
                So then submit a blog and get compensation for your time

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                • #9
                  I will ease when my finger gives the trigger a squeeze you be deceased
                  people get all paranoid every time I speak
                  that's what happens when freedom of speech
                  happens so start counting the words blasting out my mouth I am from the south CBD Rocky QLD
                  watch feel the pain dump your body in a wheelie bin with a bullet in ya head in a lane way that's what you get when you snitch us in
                  I don't need fake friends so don't pretend be a man
                  I will show loyalty for the same back to me
                  rolls the wheel on the road come with we make it home
                  makin statments is the wrong thing bling on gold
                  i make fortune your future be told
                  which one you want no need to front just stunt
                  number one rule no skinny jeans like pac you won't see me wearing them not in your dreams!

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                  • #10
                    This isn't how you submit a writing

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                    • #11
                      I'm sure he knows how to submit an entry

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                      • #12
                        Yes I do and thanks Beeper

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                        • #13
                          Work on your metrics

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                          • #14
                            I mean work on your metrics fool,
                            That shit is hard to read,
                            Cheaper than budget beer,
                            Lower than a fuckin corner queer,
                            Middle school kids woud wack your rymes away,
                            Literate college teachers woudnt know what u say,
                            It's a dead language whatever u seem to spit away,
                            Whatever ur laying out gets boring on the first line,
                            If I didnt understand english it might seem fine,
                            U make ur momma say "that boy aint fuckin mine",
                            If u missing her stop by my place anytime,
                            Got a bunch of her panties I coud spare for a dime,
                            Ur not even an e-ganster ur just a youngster e-wankster

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                            • #15
                              try on my lines we got bitches we get riches leave you in stitches quit fuckin with us this our business
                              I worth 100 dolla notes you ain't touchin dimes why try on my lines
                              try on my lines I will knock you down recline you back up so I pistol whip ya with my nine 20 times in on one line that's my time!
                              respect my shit I will cut you head off leave a bit so i can snap it offf kill the rest blast them wit my sawn off
                              keep going you find yourself left for dead in a wheelie bin with a bullet in the middle of your fucking head
                              that's what you get for snitching us in

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